Question

【題目】請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單地介紹一下網(wǎng)絡(luò)好的一面和不好的一面。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 可以幫助我們更好地了解外面的世界，開闊我們的視野；

2. 課后可以和老師在線交流，及時(shí)解決課堂上不明白的問(wèn)題；

3. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有很多不良信息，比如暴力、色情等，給學(xué)生造成不好的影響；

4. 很多學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，影響了學(xué)習(xí)；

5. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)影響視力和健康。

注意：

1. 短文必須包括所有的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，但不得逐句翻譯；

2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

參考詞匯：開闊視野broaden one’s horizons 暴力violence 色情porn 沉迷 get addicted to

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Answer 1

【答案】The Internet can help us know the world better. We can broaden our horizons through the Internet. Chatting on line with the teachers after class can help us solve the problems that we have not really understood in class. However, on the other hand, there is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on. Many students get addicted to the Internet. They spend too much time on it so that they are unable to concentrate on their studies. What’s more, spending too much time on the Internet can make us short-sighted and do harm to our health too.

We need the Internet, but we should make good use of it and get rid of the information that we don’t need.

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先審題，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單地介紹一下網(wǎng)絡(luò)好的一面和不好的一面。要點(diǎn)如下：1. 可以幫助我們更好地了解外面的世界，開闊我們的視野；2. 課后可以和老師在線交流，及時(shí)解決課堂上不明白的問(wèn)題；3. 網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有很多不良信息，比如暴力、色情等，給學(xué)生造成不好的影響；4. 很多學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)，影響了學(xué)習(xí)；5. 長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)影響視力和健康。其次要確定時(shí)態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。在寫作過(guò)程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有文采。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些高級(jí)句型。例如Chatting on line with the teachers after class can help us solve the problems that we have not really understood in class.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，使用了動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)。However, on the other hand, there is too much information that might do harm to us on the Internet, like violence, porn and so on.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，并運(yùn)用了on the other hand等連詞。