Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
暑假即將來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

	優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)
待在家中	花費(fèi)少；方便舒適	不能親身了解外界
外出旅游	增長(zhǎng)見(jiàn)識(shí)；開(kāi)闊眼界	花費(fèi)多；旅途不便；擔(dān)心安全

 

Answer 1

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Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。暑假即將來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計(jì)劃，提出了不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶�。需要�?xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)以圖表形式給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可，特別要注意在陳述完別人的觀點(diǎn)后，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。�?xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。