Question

第二卷
寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）
第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷。每行均有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)按以下情況進(jìn)行改正：
該行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線（﹨）劃掉； 
該行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞； 
該行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
Dear Tracy,
Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats              76._______
me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions.           77._______    
He is very strict in me and often punishes me for                78 _______  
leaving things lying around in the house when he did this         79._______        
all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to               80._______    
follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.”          81._______        
Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests,      82._______           
making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t            83._______          
bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk              84._______      
with him but he never listen. Please, help me.                 85._______                         
Puzzled      

Answer 1

76. 去掉Although或but                   77. carelessly→careless
78. in→with                                          79. did→does
80. 在all后加the                  81. Doing→Do
82. 去掉 more                                   83. hurting→hurt
84. how→what                                    85. listen→listens

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