【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在此處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意: 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Since my childhood, libraries had played an important role in my life. When I was a pupil, I regarded on my every trip to the school library as an adventure. I enjoyed my stay at the library when I could read various book I was interested in. It was for this reason why I decided to volunteer at a library. At first I had difficulty remember where each book should be shelved, and I got used to doing so soon with the help of a kind librarian. Working in the library might seem bored for most people. However, it was rewarding experience for me. It not only developed my ability to read, but also help me make a contribution to society.

【答案】

【1】had--have

【2】regarded后面的on去掉

【3】when--where

【4】book--books

【5】why--that

【6】remember--remembering

【7】and--but

【8】bored---boring

【9】was后面加a

【10】help--helped

【解析】

【1】had—have 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)Since my childhood自從我的童年起，可知用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，故had—have

【2】regarded后面的on去掉 考查動(dòng)詞的用法。Regard sth as …把。。當(dāng)作，，。

【3】when—where 考查定語(yǔ)從句。先行詞the library，定語(yǔ)從句I could read various book缺少狀語(yǔ)，故用where來(lái)引導(dǎo)；

【4】book—books 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。Various books各種各樣的書(shū)；

【5】why--that 考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句。這個(gè)句子是強(qiáng)調(diào)句，用來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)for this reason這個(gè)狀語(yǔ)。

【6】remember--remembering 考查動(dòng)詞的用法。Have difficulty doing sth 做某事有困難。

【7】and--but 考查連詞。句意：首先記住哪本書(shū)在哪個(gè)位置很困難但我在一位好心的管理員的幫助下很快習(xí)慣這的生活。

【8】bored---boring 考查形容詞 。句意：在圖書(shū)館工作對(duì)于大多數(shù)人來(lái)說(shuō)是非常無(wú)聊的，修飾這件事用ing的形式；

【9】was后面加a 考查冠詞。句意：然而，對(duì)于我來(lái)說(shuō)是一次很有意義的經(jīng)歷。表示泛指；

【10】help—helped 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。Not only but also連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；

考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯(cuò)。

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