Question

短文改錯 Last week my parents and I took a 　 two-day trip to Emei Mountain in 　 Sichuan．As everyone knows, it's famous 1．________ mountain with all kinds of plants 　 and animals．The weather was fine．It 2．________ was about noon we arriued at the foot 3．________ of the mountain．The three of them 4．________ were very excited．As we climbed the 　 mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting 5．________ temples and told stories．On the way 　 up I was busy taking picture since the 6．________ scenery was so beautiful．The time passes 7．________ quickly．Evening came down．We spent 8．________ the night in a hotel at the top of the 　 mountain．The food was expensive and 9．________ the service was good．I was so tired 　 that I fell asleep at the moment my 10．________ head touched the pillow．

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　1．famous→a famous

　　2．√

　　3．we→when we

　　4．them→us

　　5．visiting→visited

　　6．picture→pictures

　　7．passes→passed

　　8．去掉down

　　9．a(chǎn)nd→but

　　10．去掉at

提示：

　　1．峨嵋是一座山，要加不定冠詞a。

　　3．前后是兩個句子，用when表示時間。

　　4．前面是講我們，這里也應(yīng)該是指我們。

　　5．fed, visited, told是并列的三個動作，時態(tài)應(yīng)該一致。

　　6．picture可數(shù)名詞，這里是復(fù)數(shù)含義，要加s。

　　7．全文都是過去時，這里出現(xiàn)一般現(xiàn)在時不合適。

　　8．夜晚來臨：Evening came．

　　9．食物貴和服務(wù)好是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系。

　　10．the moment后面可以直接跟一個句子表示時間，前面不需要介詞。