【題目】升入高中，離開(kāi)了以前的老師，又結(jié)識(shí)了很多新老師。請(qǐng)你選擇一位自己最喜歡的老師介紹給大家，要點(diǎn)包括：

1.外貿(mào)性格； 2.教學(xué)特色； 3.你的評(píng)價(jià)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

My Favourite Teacher

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【答案】My Favourite Teacher

I have many teachers in my life, but Mr. Wang, my present teacher, is my favourite.

Mr. Wang is tall and thin, looking about 40 years old. He is always so kind to us students, just like our father. He has different ways of teaching in class, so we find his class lively and interesting. He always encourages us to speak English in class and never be afraid of making mistakes. Thanks to his excellent teaching, I have made rapid progress in my English.

Mr. Wang is such a good teacher that we all respect him very much. In fact, he is considered as one of the most popular teachers in my school.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇提綱式作文，請(qǐng)你選擇一位自己最喜歡的老師介紹給大家，要點(diǎn)包括：外貿(mào)性格；教學(xué)特色；你的評(píng)價(jià)。首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫(xiě)作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇提綱式作文，內(nèi)容齊全，格式正確，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。Mr. Wang is tall and thin, looking about 40 years old.現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀態(tài)；Mr. Wang is such a good teacher that we all respect him very much.句中使用ｓｕｃｈ―――ｔｈａｔ引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句；另外，ｂｕｔ／ｓｏ引導(dǎo)的并列句，Thanks to his excellent teaching, made rapid progress， In fact,的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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