下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.


【小題1】had—去掉had.
【小題2】noise—noisy.
【小題3】comes—came.
【小題4】but—and
【小題5】searching ∧the ticket—for
【小題6】his—its/the.
【小題7】a—the
【小題8】previous—previously
【小題9】strangers—stranger
【小題10】on—in

解析【試題分析】本文是一篇記敘文，敘述了作者在火車上找不到自己的票了，車上的一些陌生人都開始幫著找，結(jié)果被其中的一個(gè)乘客幫著找到了。如果我們的社會(huì)都獻(xiàn)出一點(diǎn)愛心，世界將變得更加美好。
【小題1】had—去掉had.根據(jù)上下文可知這里敘述的是過去的事情，應(yīng)該用一般過去式
【小題2】noise—noisy.我注意到車廂里是吵鬧的，并且車廂里滿人。這里was是系動(dòng)詞，后應(yīng)該用形容詞noisy吵鬧的；noise吵鬧，是名詞。
【小題3】comes—came.不久火車檢票員來檢票。因?yàn)楦鶕?jù)上文第一句可知這里敘述的是那次坐火車的事情，所以句子應(yīng)該用過去式。Comes是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；故用came過去式。
【小題4】but—and.一個(gè)乘客意識(shí)到找不到他的票了，并且他很不安。But表示前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，and表示前后是并列關(guān)系。這里因?yàn)檎也坏狡倍睦锔械讲话玻⒉皇寝D(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是順承并列關(guān)系，故用and。
【小題5】searching ∧the ticket—for.然后車廂里的每個(gè)人開始尋找這張票。這里begin doing sth開始做某事；search for sth尋找某事。
【小題6】his—its/the.這張票在離它的主人隔幾排的座位底下被找到了。這里which引導(dǎo)的是定語從句，修飾前面的先行詞ticket。owner前應(yīng)該用its指的是ticket’s或用定冠詞the表示特指。
【小題7】a—the.找到那張票的那個(gè)人笑了。因?yàn)樯衔囊呀?jīng)提到了那張票，這里再次提到，所以應(yīng)該用定冠詞the。
【小題8】previous—previously.先前車廂里沒人和票的主人說話或注意到他。Previous以前的，是形容詞；previously先前，是副詞。這里應(yīng)該用副詞來修飾動(dòng)詞had spoken。
【小題9】strangers—stranger.他們很快地給這位陌生人提供幫助。這里stranger指的是找票的那個(gè)人，是一個(gè)人，所以應(yīng)該用單數(shù)。
【小題10】on—in.如果我們能夠表示對(duì)需要的人的關(guān)心，那么這個(gè)世界將會(huì)是居住的好地方。這里是短語in need急需，介詞短語作定語，修飾前面的others,故用in。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。

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