14．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除、或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每次錯(cuò)誤以及修改均限一詞：
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed．The other day，Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming  for help．Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice．At the corner，he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand．Without hesitation，Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground．A few minutes later，three policeman came and took the robber away．Slight wounded as he was in the left hand，but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town．

分析 因?yàn)榻芸说挠⒂率论E，他在鎮(zhèn)上被稱(chēng)作少年英雄．前幾天，杰克像往常一樣正騎著自行車(chē)回家，這時(shí)突然聽(tīng)到一個(gè)女人正在喊救命．然后他迅速的向那個(gè)聲音傳來(lái)的方向騎去．在拐角處，他看見(jiàn)一個(gè)女士正在被一個(gè)人用刀脅迫．毫不猶豫，杰克立刻向劫匪猛沖過(guò)去，控制住劫匪并將其按倒在地．幾分鐘后，三個(gè)警察過(guò)來(lái)把劫匪帶走．盡管杰克左手輕微受傷，但自此以后他就成了全鎮(zhèn)上公認(rèn)的少年英雄．

解答 Jack has∧regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed．The other day，Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming  for help．T
         been                                                                                                                                                                 when
hen he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice．At the corner，he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand．Without hesitation，Jack mad
                                      in                                                                                            stopped                                      his
e a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground．A few minutes later，three policeman came and took the robber away．Slight 
  an                                                                           holding                                                                                 policemen                                              Slightly
wounded as he was in the left hand，but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town．
1．在has后加been．考查現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．be regarded as…意為"被看做/稱(chēng)作…"，由于句子是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)，所以be要用過(guò)去分詞been的形式，構(gòu)成了現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)．
2．把while改為when．考查連詞． 由句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知此處需要引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的連詞，本句的句子結(jié)構(gòu)為be doing…when…"正在做某事這時(shí)突然…"，用連詞when，while不可用于此結(jié)構(gòu)．
3．把towards改為in．考查介詞．in the direction of…在某個(gè)方向，用介詞in．
4．把stopping改為stopped．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．動(dòng)詞stop的邏輯主語(yǔ)是a woman，它們之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，所以此處用過(guò)去分詞形式表被動(dòng)．
5．把her改為his．考查代詞．此處考查形容詞性物主代詞，因?yàn)榍懊媸莂 man，所以此處用his而不是her．
6．把a(bǔ)改為an．考查冠詞．此處表示泛指用不定冠詞，因?yàn)閕mmediate是元音字母開(kāi)頭，所以用an．
7．把held改為holding．考查動(dòng)名詞．因?yàn)榉旁诮樵~by的后面所以此處用動(dòng)名詞形式．
8．把policeman改為policemen．考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．由前面的three 可知此處應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．把Slight 改為Slightly．考查副詞．由于要修飾后面的動(dòng)詞wounded，所以要用副詞形式，slight的副詞形式為slightly．
10．去掉but．由于前半句是由as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，所以此處的but與之在意義上重復(fù)，故應(yīng)去掉．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題重點(diǎn)考查了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、連詞、介詞、代詞、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞、副詞等知識(shí)點(diǎn)，做題時(shí)需要認(rèn)真讀題，在了解篇章意思的基礎(chǔ)上，根據(jù)所學(xué)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)找出錯(cuò)誤點(diǎn)并依次改正，使行文通順．

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