Question

最近有些同學(xué)偷偷在教室或宿舍吸煙，為此你班召開了一次討論會。請你根據(jù)下表討論結(jié)果給某英文報寫封100詞左右的信介紹討論情況，并簡單陳述你的看法。

75%的同學(xué)反對吸煙	25%的同學(xué)贊成吸煙
1. 吸煙能導(dǎo)致很多疾病； 2. 吸煙浪費金錢； 3. 吸煙可能引起火災(zāi)。	1. 吸煙是一種時髦； 2. 吸煙很有趣； 3. 吸煙可以提神

 注意：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear editor,
These days some students in our class smoke in the classrooms or dormitories after class.        
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Yours truly,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear editor,
These days some students in our class smoke in the classrooms or dormitories after class.   Our class had a meeting to discuss this issue. The students have two different opinions. 75% of the students think smoking is a bad habit. Firstly, smoking can cause a lot of diseases. Secondly, smoking is a waste of money. Moreover, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.
However, 25% of the students hold the idea that smoking is a kind of fashion. Meanwhile, they think smoking is of great fun. Besides, smoking can refresh themselves.
In my opinion, smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also to non-smokers. Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking at once.
Yours truly,
Li Ming

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