Question

假定你是李華，得知你的好友王平現(xiàn)在高三學(xué)習(xí)非常緊張；父母期望高, 作業(yè)繁重，測試多，高考壓力大等，他非常煩惱。請給他寫一封信，給出你的建議，幫助他擺脫煩惱。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

字?jǐn)?shù)要求：100詞左右。

Dear Wang Ping,

I've learned that you are having much trouble in your life and study.

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     Looking forward to your reply!

     Yours,

      Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Wang Ping,

I've learned that you're having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being. I'm worried about that, so I'm writing to share with you some of my ideas.

First of all, it is good having heart to heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them. Meanwhile, you had better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety. Besides, it is advisable to spare some time to take some exercise to keep refreshed and energetic. However, what’s the most important is that you should always keep optimistic and confident. Please take my advice into consideration. 

【解析】

試題分析：此作文題目是一篇應(yīng)用文，給好友寫一封信。信的主要內(nèi)容是為對方提出建議，即如何面對高三的一系列問題，作業(yè)繁重，父母期望高，考試多，壓力大等，去幫助對方克服這些困難。在審題過程中要注意內(nèi)容之間要銜接。另外，要有意識的使用較復(fù)雜的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，句識，以及高級詞匯等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中使用了較多的復(fù)雜句型結(jié)構(gòu)，例如非限制性定語從句，I've learned that you're having much trouble in your life and study, which seriously affect your physical and mental well-being you had better tell them not to push you too hard, which will lead to too much anxiety。 it is 句型，it is good having heart to heart talks with your parents regularly, telling them you know the high expectations from them and you won’t fail them。主語從句，表語從句等what’s the most important is that you should always。其次這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，first of all meanwhile besides等詞的使用，使文章之間層次很清晰。

考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語言的綜合運(yùn)用能力