Question

8．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，為了提倡節(jié)約能源，你校決定開展"小事從我做起活動"，現(xiàn)發(fā)出倡議．要求如下：
1．倡議的理由；
2．倡議的內(nèi)容．
注意：1．字數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．倡議書開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear students，
Nowadays，there exists an increasingly serious problem about waste on our campus．For instance，some of you leave the classroom with the lights on．Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running．It is time that we took action to avoid unnecessary waste．
To start with，try to form the habit of turning off the taps and lights immediately after using them．What's more，make sure that all electric facilities are turned off in time．Thirdly，let's make the best of both sides of paper whenever possible．
In a wo rd，everybo dy should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life．
Students Union．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
For instance，some of you leave the classroom with the lights on．Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running
例如，你們中的一些人開著燈離開教室，另一個例子是我們經(jīng)常把水留下來沒關(guān)．
高分句型二：
In a wo rd，everybody should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life．
一言以蔽之，每個人都應(yīng)該減少浪費的意識，學(xué)會在日常生活中節(jié)約能源．

解答 One possible version：
Dear students，
Nowadays，there exists an increasingly serious problem about waste on our campus．For instance，some of you leave the classroom with the lights on．Another case in point is that we often s ee water is left running（高分句型一）．It is time that we took action to avoid unnecessary waste．
To start with，try to form the habit of turning off the taps and lights immediately after using them．What's more，make sure that all electric facilities are turned off in time．Thirdly，let's make the best of both sides of paper whenever possible．
In a wo rd，everybody should have the awareness of reducing waste and learn to save energy in daily life（高分句型二）．
                                                                                                                               Students Union

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．