Question

最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開(kāi)設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)。
1.你校開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)的情況；
2.你參加過(guò)的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來(lái)的益處
3.為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議
4. 為學(xué)校開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)提出建議
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名
3.稿件的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. _______________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.From joozone.com.
Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.

本作文為提綱式的稿件文章，立意為鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生積極參加課外活動(dòng)，這個(gè)話題考生比較熟悉，有話可說(shuō)，有感可寫(xiě)。根據(jù)所給提綱，學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作思路會(huì)比較清晰，分別從開(kāi)展課外活動(dòng)的情況、益處、為同學(xué)選擇提建議以及為學(xué)校開(kāi)展活動(dòng)提建議，框架清晰，思路明確。主要考察學(xué)生英語(yǔ)的基本功和組織自己觀點(diǎn)、給出理由進(jìn)行闡述的能力，考查范圍比較綜合。提綱式作文要注意文章之間的邏輯關(guān)系，比如這篇文章中因果關(guān)系的闡述，考生不宜直接堆砌觀點(diǎn)，要有理有據(jù)，文章的承轉(zhuǎn)得當(dāng)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，綜合多種語(yǔ)法和豐富詞匯的選擇，在不遺漏要點(diǎn)的情況下適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，給出合理化的原因和建議。總的來(lái)說(shuō)，今年四川卷的作文中規(guī)中矩，考察面廣，不僅考察考生的語(yǔ)言水平，也考察了行文構(gòu)思和邏輯。