Question

5．下文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤．請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（　　），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（　�。﹦澋簦�
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每句不超過兩個(gè)錯(cuò)誤．
      2．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
      3．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．

    The other day，my friends and I talked to the rules that we have in school．At our school，we had to wear the school uniforms every day，or the problem is that all my classmates feel the uniforms are ugly．We think that young people should look like smart and you would like to wear our own clothes．Our teachers believe that if we do it，we will concentrate much on our clothes than our studies．But we disagree．We will feel more comfortably if we wear our own clothes．If we can't do it，we should be allowing to design our own uniforms．That could be good solution to this problems．

Answer 1

分析 作者在短文中發(fā)表了對(duì)學(xué)校要求學(xué)生每天穿校服的看法．絕大多數(shù)學(xué)生都認(rèn)為校服不好看，還是穿自己的服裝更舒服一些，但老師確認(rèn)為那樣會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí)．作者認(rèn)為
如果非要穿校服的話，那就應(yīng)該讓學(xué)生自己設(shè)計(jì)自己的校服，這將會(huì)是一個(gè)好的解決辦法．

解答 The other day，my friends and I talked to the rules that we have in school．At our school，we  had to wear the school uniforms every day，or the problem is that
                                                       about                                                                            have                                                          and
all my classmates feel the uniforms are ugly．We think that young people should look likesmart and youwould like to wear our own clothes．Our teachers believe
                                                                                                                         去掉like                we
that if we do it，we will concentrate muchon our clothes than our studies．But we disagree．We will feel more comfortably if we wear our own clothes．If we can'
                                                      more                                                                                                      comfortable
do it，we should be allowingto design our own uniforms．That could be good∧solution to this problems．
                               allowed                                                                        a                          problem
1．to改為about；
2．had改為have；考查時(shí)態(tài)，結(jié)合上下文語境，這句講的是"我們"平時(shí)在學(xué)校的一種習(xí)慣性行為，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．
3．or改為but；考查連詞，這里用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折，句意為"我們不得不每天都穿校服，但問題是同學(xué)們都覺得校服很難看"．
4．去掉like；考查動(dòng)詞，look like 中，like是介詞，后跟名詞或名詞性短語，這里like用作系動(dòng)詞"看起來.."，后跟形容詞做表語．
5．you改為we；考查物主代詞，根據(jù)句意，這里主語應(yīng)與前句的主語保持一致，故用we．
6．much改為more；考查比較級(jí)，本句是典型的比較級(jí)結(jié)構(gòu)more…than…
7．comfortably改為comfortable；考查形容詞，這里句子中的feel用作系動(dòng)詞，后面跟形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)．
8．a(chǎn)llowing改為allowed；考查語態(tài)，這里主語we和謂語動(dòng)詞allow之間應(yīng)當(dāng)是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以用被動(dòng)語態(tài)．
9．solution前面加a；考查冠詞，solution是可數(shù)名詞，前加a表示"一個(gè)方法"．
10．problems改為problem；考查名詞，這里有指示代詞this，所以要用單數(shù)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 通過快速閱讀短文了解短文的基本大意，再分析句子間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系，從詞義，詞性，固定短語，句式結(jié)構(gòu)等方面去找文中存在的錯(cuò)誤加以修改．