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在現(xiàn)今資訊科技發(fā)達(dá)的年代，人們可從不同途徑獲得所需信息，從而忽視了閱讀。請你以“Reading enriches the mind.” 為題，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，簡要分析時(shí)弊，談?wù)勀銓﹂喿x的理解和看法。
注意：文中不能透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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Possible version:
Reading enriches the mind
Today, in the age of advances in information technology, it is very convenient for people together the information they need. As a result, more and more people neglect the importance of reading, which, I think, is not a healthy phenomenon.
We can’t deny that reading can, first of all, broaden our view and enrich the mind. As we all know, books reveal to us a mysterious wonderland in which we will obtain various experience. We learn to look beyond our immediate surroundings to the horizon and a landscape far away from home. Secondly, reading plays an important part in the character development and personal growth. As a proverb puts it, knowledge makes a gentleman.
In a word, people can’t live without books. Remember not to put all the energy on the Internet and the like but to leave some time to read various books.

解析試題分析：拿到作文題目，首先要認(rèn)真審題，這是一篇提綱作文，在現(xiàn)今資訊科技發(fā)達(dá)的年代，人們可從不同途徑獲得所需信息，從而忽視了閱讀。請你以“Reading enriches the mind.” 為題，寫一篇120詞左右的短文，簡要分析時(shí)弊，談?wù)勀銓﹂喿x的理解和看法,所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時(shí)不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右。
考點(diǎn)：提綱作文
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。