Question

讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)： 閱讀下面短文,然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇 150 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

This November, I turn 26. This will be my third birthday as a wife. My husband doesn’t like parties nor does he remember the birthdays of his family members, including his own birthday! And he always refuses the idea of celebrating birthdays. For him it is only a waste of money and time! For me, celebrating a birthday is not a big deal as long as somebody remembers my birthday and says “happy birthday” to me, which will make my day brighter. And I’m sure my parents will call me and say these words, but not my husband. In my heart I still hope that he will remember my birthday. Until now, I only remember cebelebrating my birthday twice. The first time was when I turn 12 years old. I treated my close friends to a meal in the school canteen. But I will always remember my 17th birthday. It seemed that nobody in my class talked about my birthday that day. I thought there would be no celebrating so I felt unhappy. But after the bell rang to end the class, my friends threw gifts onto my desk and said, “Happy birthday” And that day became the happiest moment I ever experienced.

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30詞概括閱讀材料的主要內(nèi)容。

2. 很多中學(xué)生經(jīng)常在餐館舉行生日派對(duì)，花很多錢(qián)購(gòu)買(mǎi)生日禮物。請(qǐng)你以約120詞談?wù)勀銓?duì)青少年過(guò)生日的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

(1) 你認(rèn)為青少年應(yīng)如何過(guò)生日？

(2) 你的生日是怎樣度過(guò)的？為什么這樣做？

[寫(xiě)作要求]

1. 在作文中可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn) ,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容 ,但不 得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。

Answer 1

The passage tells us about the celebration of the author's birthday now and in the past.Her husband doesn't like the idea of having birthday parties but she meaningfully celebrated her birthday twice at 12 and 17.

Nowadays many high school students tend to have birthday parties at restaurants.At the same time, a lot of birthday gifts, such as birthday cakes and something expensive, will be bought and given to the birthday person.However, all the money needed is from the hard?earned money of their parents.

As we know, most teenagers from Western countries usually find a part?time job to earn their pocket money.We Chinese teenagers mainly depend upon our parents for money for our daily use.It is wise for us to celebrate our birthday economically.We can give some hand?made gifts and our best wishes to the birthday person instead of expensive gifts.

I remembered clearly celebrating my 15th birthday.My classmates sent me many special things, such as a pen with my name on it, a novel I liked best and an English song sung by them.I think luxurious parties are a waste of our precious time and limited money.

【解析】

試題分析：

1．范文概括部分總結(jié)了閱讀材料中丈夫及妻子各自對(duì)于過(guò)生日的看法以及妻子兩次非常有意義的生日慶�；顒�(dòng)。

2．范文第二段介紹目前青少年過(guò)生日的普遍做法：在飯店舉行生日宴會(huì)、購(gòu)買(mǎi)昂貴的生日禮物。隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展以及外來(lái)文化的影響，生日聚會(huì)在我國(guó)青少年中廣受歡迎，作者通過(guò)第三段分析了國(guó)內(nèi)外青少年的不同觀點(diǎn)及經(jīng)濟(jì)現(xiàn)狀——外國(guó)青少年舉辦生日聚會(huì)、購(gòu)買(mǎi)生日禮物的好多費(fèi)用是他們平時(shí)賺的錢(qián)，而不是伸手向父母要的。最后一段介紹了作者過(guò)生日的做法及觀點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文詞語(yǔ)和句型運(yùn)用嫻熟，各種句型的交錯(cuò)運(yùn)用使文章特別符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)的習(xí)慣。一些高考重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)及句型的運(yùn)用也為文章增色不少，如tend to do sth, as we know, depend upon, it is wise for sb to do sth, instead of, a waste of等。

考點(diǎn)：寫(xiě)作任務(wù)類(lèi)作文。