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增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Throughout history man has changed their physical environment in order to improve his way of life. With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical features of the earth. Thus, man’s change to the physical environment have not always had beneficial results. Today, pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet. Like we know, massive destruction of environment has brought in negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence. Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws pass to conserve environment. Otherwise, man is certain to suffer the serious consequences causing by this lack of care for his living surroundings.


【小題1】their 改為his
【小題2】去掉that
【小題3】Thus改為However
【小題4】change改為changes
【小題5】a改為an
【小題6】Like改為As
【小題7】in改為about;
【小題8】pass改為passed
【小題9】suffer后加from
【小題10】causing改為caused

解析試題分析：文章介紹人的行為對地球造成的破壞和警示人們?nèi)绻俨徊扇〈胧�，受苦的將是人類自己�?br />【小題1】此處代指：man應(yīng)該使用單數(shù)的：his，也可參考下文的：his way of life，故此their改為his。
【小題2】隨著科技的發(fā)展他已經(jīng)改變了很多地球的物質(zhì)方面。這句話沒有從句，不要用that連接。
【小題3】此處是單句不需要連詞，所以that去掉；前后句子屬于轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故此thus改為however。
【小題4】這句話的謂語是have had，所以應(yīng)該把句子主語change改為changes。
【小題5】名詞air為不可數(shù)，the多余；單詞increasing為元音讀音開頭，所以a改為an。
【小題6】此處應(yīng)該使用連詞：as表示正如、正像，所以like改為as。
【小題7】in改為about; 此處bring about表示帶來、造成之意。
【小題8】分析結(jié)構(gòu)可知：laws和動詞pass屬于被動關(guān)系，所以pass改為passed。
【小題9】人類一定會遭受因為對生存環(huán)境缺乏關(guān)心而帶來的痛苦。suffer from“受…的苦”。
【小題10】句子譯文如下：由于對生活壞境缺少關(guān)愛造成的嚴重后果，所以屬于被動關(guān)系，故此causing改為caused。
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