Question

【題目】90后出生的學(xué)生，思想特殊、行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。假如你是一名90后出生的學(xué)生李華，請根據(jù)下表中所提供信息以“Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”為題寫一篇英語演講稿，以消除人們的憂慮。

90后的境遇	面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱，所處環(huán)境競爭更加激烈。
人們的憂慮		1．注重自我，輕視合作，…… 2．缺乏毅力，容易氣餒，…… 3．盲目追求，渴望成名，……
我們的長處	有勇氣來面對挑戰(zhàn)，…… （請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，再列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。）

注意：

1．對所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2．詞數(shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3．演講稿中不得提及考生所在班級及本人姓名。

4．參考詞匯：盲目：blindly 毅力:perseverance

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.

Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.

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Thank you for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.

Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which have raised people’s concern. They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.

However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced.

Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于演講稿，根據(jù)所給信息和觀點(diǎn)來行文。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)信息，明確有要點(diǎn)。2、根據(jù)所給信息和觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象，文章要富有感染力。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.動詞ing作狀語和定語從句we are developing our special manners and values, which have raised people’s concern.和They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.是非限制性定語從句，還有表語從句this is what it takes to do any job well；They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.是賓語從句，同位語從句和非限制性定語從句的結(jié)合等。此外，文章還使用了大量短語Living in , full of , be faced with, Under these circumstances, cooperate with等。以及副詞besides, However, Firstly, In addition, Yet,等的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。