Question

第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面加上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.

Answer 1

【小題1】breads→bread
【小題2】packing→packed
【小題3】with 后加 the
【小題4】that→who
【小題5】with去掉
【小題6】begin→began
【小題7】his→her
【小題8】though→because/ as / for/since
【小題9】or→and
【小題10】late→later

解析試題分析：本文敘述了作者在買(mǎi)了面包回家的路上，結(jié)果在回家的路上碰見(jiàn)了鄰居在遛狗，他們談?wù)摿艘粫?huì)兒，這時(shí)狗聞到了面包的味道，結(jié)果最后把面包給吃掉了，作者沒(méi)有辦法，又去商店買(mǎi)了一些面包。
【小題1】I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads.中bread是不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以把breads改為bread。
【小題2】After the man in the store packing the bread 。句中缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，而且文章敘述過(guò)去的事情，所以把packing改為過(guò)去式packed 。
【小題3】I began to walk home with bag in my hand. 其中 bag 為可數(shù)名詞，并且是指前面提到過(guò)的bag，所以with 后加定冠詞the表示特指。
【小題4】Miss Wang, that was walking her dog . Miss Wang 后應(yīng)該是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，that不引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，所以把that改為who。
【小題5】We greeted with each other .  greet是及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接跟賓語(yǔ)，所以去掉with。
【小題6】We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather.句中begin 和greeted 是并列謂語(yǔ)，全文用過(guò)去時(shí)，所以begin改為過(guò)去式began。
【小題7】his dog came up at the bag文中是指Miss Wang 在遛狗，人稱(chēng)指代錯(cuò)誤，所以把his改為her。
【小題8】though the bread gave off a delicious smell句中指面包發(fā)出的味道引的狗竄上來(lái)，是因果關(guān)系，所以though改為because/ as / for/since。
【小題9】or the dog began to enjoy it 面包掉在地上和狗開(kāi)始吃應(yīng)該是順承關(guān)系，所以or改為and。
【小題10】Five minutes late固定短語(yǔ)“多久后”應(yīng)該用時(shí)間段+later，所以 late改為later。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。