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2．散步是一種良好的鍛煉方式，它對我們的健康非常有益．請以"Walking to Keep Fit"為題寫一篇120詞左右的英語短文，介紹一下散步的好處以及你的建議．
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Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health．
我們都知道，散步是一種很好的運動方式，有利于我們的健康．
高分句型二：
It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones．
它不僅可以減少多種疾病的風(fēng)險，還能使肌肉和骨頭更加強壯．

解答 Walking to Keep Fit
As we all know，walking is a good way of exercise，which is beneficial to our health（高分句型一）．It cannot only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases but also strengthen the muscles and build up the bones（高分句型二）．It's safer than many other ways of exercise，especially for the elderly and it's easy to do without considering rules．Besides，walking can also help us lose weight．
What should we pay attention to during the walk？First，we should wear loose clothes and good shoes so that we can relax．Second，we should walk fast enough to cause us to breathe with difficulty but still able to talk．Third，it's important to walk with our arms moving freely．And last but not least we should do it every day．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．