Question

林書豪（Jeremy Shu-How Lin）是一位美國NBA職業(yè)籃球運動員。請按照下面的提示信息和要求用英語寫一篇介紹他的短文。
1. 美籍華人（American-born Chinese），生日：1988年8月23日， 喜愛打籃球。
2. 畢業(yè)于哈佛大學，是NBA史上首位美籍華裔球員。
3. 2011年為尼克斯隊（the New York Knicks）效力一年后加入休斯敦火箭隊（the Houston Rockets）。林書豪打破多項NBA紀錄。
4. 他每天不斷的鍛煉他的籃球技能，因為他相信只要不斷練習就能取得成功。
5. 他是最棒的是我們的驕傲。
要求:  (1) 字數(shù)：120左右， (2) 可適當增加信息使文章保持連貫。

Answer 1

One possible version:
Jeremy Shu-How Lin is an American professional basketball player for the Huston Rocket of the NBA.
Born on August 23^rd, 1988,he likes playing basketball from an early age. Lin is the first Chinese American player in the history of the NBA and also the first one who graduated from Harvard University. After graduation, he played for the New York Knicks for one year and then he joined the Huston Rocket where he became famous all over the world. During this period, he broke many NBA records.
Lin insists on practicing playing basketball and exercising every day. Because he believes that only by working hard can he succeed. In a word, Jeremy Shu-How Lin is awesome and we are proud of him.

解析試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，考生在寫作之前必須認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)，要求根據(jù)所給漢語介紹林書豪，所以要注意用一般現(xiàn)在時和過去時。人稱用第三人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯，還應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如insists on，are proud of ，還運用了過去分詞做狀語、倒裝句等等。并注意了句子開頭的變化和銜接如： In a word 等。
考點：提綱作文。