Question

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in what we hope to accomplish.
注意： ①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④詞數(shù)為不少于120字，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Answer 1

“Actions speak louder than words.” The message in this saying is conveyed very clearly: taking action is more meaningful than just shouting empty slogans. Only if we match our words with actions can we achieve our dream.
When it comes to taking action, Nelson Mandela’s example can’t escape me. Even when he was a young man, he dreamed of making black people and white people equal. Rather than just paying lip service, he went through many struggles to put his ideas into practice. To make his dream come true, he himself was in prison for almost thirty years. Not only has he inspired many to follow him despite many difficulties, but he has become an international symbol for fairness and justice.
Nelson Mandela sets a good example to us all, which makes it self-evident that we must take immediate action to make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

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