Question

學(xué)校即將舉行以"Music and My Life"為主題的英語(yǔ)作文比賽,請(qǐng)按下列要求寫(xiě)一篇詞數(shù)100-120左右的作文。內(nèi)容需包括:
◆我喜歡的音樂(lè)類(lèi)型
◆最喜歡在什么時(shí)候聽(tīng)音樂(lè)
◆音樂(lè)帶給了我什么
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Answer 1

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I like music and I think most people like it as much as I do. While most of people nowadays like modern music such as rock and pop music, I like listening to classical music. For many people, they find classical music boring to listen. However, I think classical music is serious and can make people inspired. Unlike modern music, most of the classical music can last long. Every time I feel tired or anxious, classical music helps me calm down. Music plays an important part in my life. Music makes my life more colorful and gives me a lot of entertainment. More importantly, it makes me refreshed. If there were no music in the world, it would really be a boring and dull place!

試題分析：寫(xiě)作時(shí)認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁。應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面。(1)時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：文章中忽視了動(dòng)作發(fā)生的時(shí)間。(2)人稱(chēng)代詞錯(cuò)誤：?jiǎn)螐?fù)數(shù)、形容詞性物主代詞與名詞性物主代詞錯(cuò)誤。(3)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、動(dòng)詞單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂語(yǔ)不一致。(4)用詞錯(cuò)誤：對(duì)同義詞的區(qū)別、使用場(chǎng)合、習(xí)慣用法不熟悉，或者忘記了單詞。(5)內(nèi)容不連貫：不會(huì)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，語(yǔ)序混亂。沒(méi)有統(tǒng)籌安排，寫(xiě)到哪里，就停在哪里。(6)大小寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，缺少冠詞。(7)書(shū)寫(xiě)混亂，卷面潦草。
考點(diǎn)：
點(diǎn)評(píng)：好作文應(yīng)該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語(yǔ)法、拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，用詞恰當(dāng)。為了避免太多單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要為了追求詞語(yǔ)的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒(méi)把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長(zhǎng)句而寫(xiě)一些自己不知對(duì)錯(cuò)的有多個(gè)從句組成的長(zhǎng)句�？荚嚂r(shí)最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語(yǔ)，句式。