Question

第Ⅱ卷（共40分）
第三部分：寫作
第一節(jié) 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤.對標題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
me, but was strict whit me than before. With her help, I went the hardest time and made great
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
thanks to our parents.

Answer 1

When I was 5, my father bought me the piano with all the money he had saved. Every day I
a
practiced playing it though my father demanded. But before long, I transferred my interest in the
as
piano to some other thing so began to avoid practice it. When my after realized this, he encouraged
things              practising
me, but was ∧strict whit me than before. With her help, I went∧ the hardest time and made great
more或stricter    his        underwent experienced或through
progress. Here I sincere express my gratitude to my father. On the journey of life, our parents have
sincerely
lit the light of hope for us. What they have done broaden our horizon. No one deserves bigger
broadens
thanks to our parents.

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