Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
On a storm night, I was alone at home. After finishing my homework, I was about to go to bed. All of sudden, the light went out. Meanwhile, there was a flash of lightning following by thunderstorms. I was so scared that I ran to my bed but hid myself under the blanket. To make matters bad, my parents went to hospital to accompany with my sick grandfather. I felt too frightened because my mind was full of scary thought. After some time passed, I fall asleep at last. At breakfast I told my parents that I had seen last night. My parents were also frightened and they promised that they would ever leave me at home alone.

Answer 1

【答案】①storm---stormy ②sudden前加a ③following---followed ④but---and ⑤bad---worse ⑥with去掉 ⑦thought---thoughts
⑧fall---fell ⑨t(yī)hat---what ⑩ever---never

【解析】①考查形容詞。句意：在一個(gè)暴風(fēng)雨的夜晚，我獨(dú)自在家。修飾名詞用形容詞作定語，storm“暴風(fēng)雨”是名詞，其形容詞形式是stormy表示“暴風(fēng)雨的”。故將storm改為stomy。

②考查冠詞。句意：突然，停電了。all of a sudden“突然”是固定短語。故在sudden前加a。

③考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：閃電過后出現(xiàn)雷暴。“followed by thunderstorms”作定語從句，修飾lightening，結(jié)合句意，follow與lightning是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用過去分詞表示被動(dòng)關(guān)系。故將following改為followed。

④考查連詞。句意：我如此害怕，跑到床上藏在毯子底下。結(jié)合句意，前后分句是順承關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將but改為and。

⑤考查形容詞。句意：更糟糕的是，我的父母去醫(yī)院陪同我生病的祖父。to make matters worse“更糟糕的是”是固定短語，故將bad改為worse。

⑥考查介詞。句意：更糟糕的是，我的父母去醫(yī)院陪同我生病的祖父。accompany“陪伴；陪同”是及物動(dòng)詞，直接跟賓語。故去掉accompany后的with。

⑦考查名詞。句意：我覺得很害怕，因?yàn)槲业男睦锍錆M了恐怖的想法。thought“想法”是可數(shù)名詞，結(jié)合句意，故將thought改為thoughts。

⑧考查動(dòng)詞。句意：過了段時(shí)間，最終我睡著了。根據(jù)語境可知，文章講述過去發(fā)生的事情用一般過去時(shí)。故將fall改為fell。

⑨考查連詞。句意：早飯時(shí)，我告示父母我昨天晚上看到的�！皐hat I had seen”是賓語從句，從句缺乏賓語，what引導(dǎo)賓語從句，從句中作主語、賓語或者表語，that引導(dǎo)賓語從句，無詞義，不做成分，僅起引導(dǎo)作用。故將that改為what。

⑩考查副詞。句意：我的父母也害怕，許諾他們將再也不會(huì)獨(dú)自留我在家。根據(jù)句意，故把ever改為never。