Question

15．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高中生李華．你校擬選拔一些優(yōu)秀學(xué)生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)．你希望參加此活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給校評(píng)選組寫一封申請(qǐng)信：
◎?qū)Υ嘶顒?dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)（如對(duì)本人、學(xué)生及社會(huì)的益處等）
◎個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)（如性格、獨(dú)立生活能力、語(yǔ)言能力等）
◎你的計(jì)劃（如怎樣進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)等）
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)；
4．卷面2分．
參考詞匯：
晨曦希望小學(xué)Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．
As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)）
My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計(jì)劃）
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是書信類作文，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容給學(xué)校寫一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)用暑期到晨曦希望小學(xué)為學(xué)生輔導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)．屬于提綱作文．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：As far as I am concerned （據(jù)我所知），result in （導(dǎo)致），be qualified for （有資格，合格），be independent （獨(dú)立），instructive（有教育意義），stimulate interests in（激發(fā)…的興趣）．
As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】
That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】
What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．【高分句型】（對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)）
       I think I am qualified for being the pupils'English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．【高分句型】（個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)）
       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．【高分句型】I hope you can offer the opportunity．（計(jì)劃）
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．