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5．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．A smile is great importance to us because it has magic powers．It can not only refresh us mentally but also keep us closely to each other．
Last week，I take part in an English corner for the first time．When I arrived there，I felt so nervous that I had no idea what to express myself．Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face．He told me he felt the same way the first time that he came to the activity．He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely．Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile，it made me feel comfortable and confident．
I don't remember what I said that day，but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory．

Answer 1

分析 作者在第一次參加英語角的時候感覺很緊張，一個同學(xué)給他說了很多鼓勵了他，雖然不是很記得那個同學(xué)的話，但是依然記得他的笑容．

解答 A smile is∧great importance to us because it has magic powers．It can not only refresh us mentally but also keep us closely to each other．Last week，I take part in an English corner for the first time．When I arrived there，I felt so nervous  that I had no idea what to express myself．Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face．He told me he same way the first timethat he came to the activity．He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely．Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile，it made me feel comfortable and confident．
I don't remember what I said that day，but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory．
1．is后加of 考查固定句型．It is+of+名詞是英語的固定句型 is of importance=is important．
2．closely改成closed 考查形容詞．此處用形容詞作賓語補足語．closed是形容詞"近的"．
3．take改成took 考查時態(tài)．時間狀語是last week"上星期"，所以用過去時took．
4．what改成how 考查固定結(jié)構(gòu)．疑問詞+to do可以在句中做成分，"我不知道該如何表達我自己"．
5．the改成an 考查冠詞．這里是指一個男孩．是泛指所以用不定冠詞，因為enthusiastic開頭字母發(fā)元音，所以答案是an．
6．刪除that 考查連詞．the first time 是時間狀語的連詞"第一次"，that重復(fù)．
7．spoke改成speak 考查動詞．encourage sb to do是英語的固定搭配，open與speak是并列的，所以用speak．
8．a(chǎn)nyone改成everyone 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：在場的每一個人．所以用everyone．a(chǎn)nyone是任何人、
9．it改成which 考查定語從句．這是一個非限制性定語從句，which指代前文整句話的意思．which在從句中做主語．
10．remains改成remain 考查主謂一致．本句的主語是faces復(fù)數(shù)名詞，謂語動詞不用三單形式．所以答案是remain．

點評 短文改錯考查涉及面廣，但卻有所側(cè)重．考查點測試頻率最高的是動詞，涉及動詞考查的有時態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂語動詞形式、情態(tài)動詞和動詞的用法等．此外，還考查名詞、介詞、代詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、連詞等，還涉及到句型結(jié)構(gòu)、行文邏輯、固定搭配等．