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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Dear editor，

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.

Answer 1

【答案】1. I really 前的and→ but

2. anything→ something

3.reason→ reasons

4.去掉as后的it

5.trouble→ troubles

6.where→ which

7.place→ places

8.mostly→ most

9.Take→ Taking

10.do→ to do

【解析】１.句意：對不起我占用了你的寶貴時間，但是我真的想告訴你一些關(guān)于―――。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把I really 前的and→ but。

２.句意：我想告訴你一些關(guān)于目前一些人養(yǎng)很多寵物的事情。此句是肯定句，故把 anything→ something。

３．句意：因為下面的理由，我越來越認(rèn)真對待這個問題。下面的理由不止一個，可知名詞用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把reason→ reasons。

４.固定結(jié)構(gòu)：ａｓ　ｉｓ�。耄睿铮�ｎ　ｔｏ�。幔欤欤�眾所周知，故去掉as后的it。

５.句意：眾所周知，寵物制造非常大的干擾村民的噪音。此處是ｎｏｉｓｅ做先行詞，指物，在后面的限制性定語從句中做主語，ｎｏｉｓｅ是不可數(shù)名詞，后面的謂語動詞用單數(shù)形式，根據(jù)句意可知句子用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，故.把trouble→ troubles 。

６.此處是整個句子做先行詞，后面是ｗｈｉｃｈ引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，故把where→ which。

７.句意：很多主人喜歡吧寵物帶到公共場所。“公共場所”應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把.place→ places。

８. 句意：最重要的是―――。此處是形容詞最高級，故把mostly→ most。

９.此處是現(xiàn)在分詞做時間狀語，表主動關(guān)系，故把Take→ Taking。

１０.固定搭配：ｅｘｐｅｃｔ�。螅猓��。�ｏ�。洌铩。螅簦瑁�期盼某人做某事，故do→ to do。