Question

14．假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會主席．即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮．
1．時間：6月6日  上午9：00； 地點：學(xué)校音樂廳；
2．介紹畢業(yè)典禮的活動；
3．希望Jeff能夠發(fā)表簡短的演講．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jeff，
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9：00 am，on June 6^th．It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）Moreover，videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality．Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）
Please reply at your earliest convenience．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會主席．即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：時間：6月6日  上午9：00； 地點：學(xué)校音樂廳；介紹畢業(yè)典禮的活動；希望Jeff能夠發(fā)表簡短的演講． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：rang from…to…從…到…；Moreover而且；attend our graduation ceremony參加畢業(yè)典禮；
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）
Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jeff，
       I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
       The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9：00 am，on June 6^th．It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）Moreover，videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality．Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）
       Please reply at your earliest convenience．                                                             
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．