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16．Nowadays，the term"sense of happiness"has been repeatedly mentioned in various medias．During the National Day holidays，CCTV did a nation-wide survey by asking random passers-by the question"Are you happy now？What exactly is happiness in your eyes？"The survey aroused a heated discussion across the country and people from all walks of life expressed their opinions．
"I would say I'm pretty happy at present because my dear daughter has graduated from college and found herself a decent job．"said a woman in her fifties with a big smile on her face．
Though it seemed that most people said they were happy，different voices were still heard and should not be ignored．There was a migrant worker（農(nóng)民工） whose answer to the question was widely spread online．When asked if he was happy，he said"My family name is Zeng"，showing his determination to refuse the interview as well as his annoyance to mention happiness．
The brand-new Chinese Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan answered"I don't know"in an interview when he was asked the same question：Are you happy？
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"幸福"的話題談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）目前你是否感到幸福及其原因；
（2）請描述到現(xiàn)在為止讓你覺得最幸福的一件事情；
（3）談?wù)勀銓π腋５睦斫猓?br />[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事．也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語：at present（現(xiàn)在），to the fullest（最充分地），fulfill one's dreams（實(shí)現(xiàn)某人的夢想），sth happen to sb（某人發(fā)生什么事），receive the scholarship（獲得獎學(xué)金），go through （經(jīng)歷），financial difficulties（經(jīng)濟(jì)上的困難），make up one's mind（下定決心），win the scholarship（贏得獎學(xué)金），lighten financial burden（減輕經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)），make efforts（努力），lie in（在于），as far as sb be concerned（就某人關(guān)注的而言），．
【高分句型一】
1．When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy，most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．
此處是時間狀語從句中的省略，可以理解為"When they are asked by the CCTV whether they were happy"，主句為"most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．"．
【高分句型二】
1．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoping to lighten my parents'financial burden．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語，主句為"I made up my mind to win the scholarship"，主句的主語為"I"，與所給動詞"hope"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
【高分句型三】
3．It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life．
此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，如果去掉強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，原句句子成分齊全，句意通順．

解答 When asked by the CCTV whether they were happy，most people gave a positive answer while some didn't．【高分句型一】The Nobel Prize winner Mo Yan said he didn't know whether he was happy or not．（概括）
        At present，I am pretty happy because I am doing what I like and I like what I am doing．As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it to the fullest．It feels good to study hard with my determined classmates to fulfill our dreams．（是否感到幸福及其原因）
  When I recall the happy things which happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped them all．It was a time when my family was going through the extreme financial difficulties．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoping to lighten my parents'financial burden．【高分句型二】After making tons of painstaking efforts，I succeeded．At the ceremony，I could see my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman，yet with the brightest smile on her face．It was the happiest thing ever happening to me that I will treasure for the rest of my life．【高分句型三】（你覺得最幸福的一件事情）
         As far as I am concerned，happiness lies in the effort of making those we love smile．When we bring happiness to them，it gives happiness to ourselves．（個人觀點(diǎn)：對幸福的理解）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．