I don't think it's good to let children go abroad for further study.

　　However, some parents are in favor of the idea. They believe children can receive a better education－and learn a foreign language better. Also they can earn more money in the future.

　　As a matter of fact, there are more disadvantages than advantages. As we know, studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as studying in China. Besides, children are too young to take care of themselves. What's more, they might follow bad examples.

　　At the same time, measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一篇議論文，作者能夠按寫作提示對事件簡要評(píng)述，要點(diǎn)齊全，議論比較有條理性、有邏輯性，遣詞造句均能達(dá)意，并能較好地使用一些較高級(jí)詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)（如：What's more；meet the needs；measures should be taken by the government to set up…；they might follow bad examples等）。時(shí)態(tài)把握得比較到位。議論的這種現(xiàn)象是目前存在的，所以作者選用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。整體來看是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。