Question

【題目】Correction 3（2017·新課標III卷）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

Answer 1

【答案】

When I look at this picture of myself. I realize how fast time flies. I grown not only physically, also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was , I entered my second year of high school and a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of high school days.

【解析】

第一處：刪除realize后的of 考查介詞。realize是及物動詞，后面接賓語時不需要介詞。

第二處： had→have 考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)時間狀語in the past few years判斷用現(xiàn)在完成時。

第三處： and→but 考查連詞。固定短語not only…but also…意為＂不但……而且……＂。

第四處： took→taken 考查動詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處表示被動含義，故把took改為taken。

第五處： become→became 考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)and前面的動詞entered判斷該句應(yīng)該用一般過去時。

第六處：在picture前加the/ this 考查限定詞的用法。單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞前應(yīng)該有限定詞，根據(jù)句意可知在picture前加the或者this。

第七處：they→that/which 考查定語從句。they不能引導(dǎo)定語從句，因為指代things，所以把they改為that或者which。

第八處：difference→different 考查形容詞。修飾名詞kinds應(yīng)該用形容詞形式。

第九處： late→latest 考查形容詞最高級。根據(jù)句意可知此處指最新的音樂唱片，故把late改為latest。

第十處：your→my 考查代詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處是我高中時代生活的美好回憶，故把your改為my。