Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Dear Diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost her job, and as Mom explained, ＂He is lucky to find other one.＂ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school and just everything else I love in the world. To make things bad, now I have to share a room to my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am very tiring, but I know I’ll never fall asleep. Good night, or remember, you is my only souvenir(紀(jì)念品) of my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Diary,

Here I am in the middle of a city,350 miles away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we last week? Dad lost job, and as Mom explained, ＂He is lucky to find one.＂ His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my , my school and just everything else I love in the world. To make things, now I have to share a room my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am very, but I know I’ll never fall asleep. Good night, or remember, you my only souvenir(紀(jì)念品) of my past life and my only friend.

Yours,

Rosemary

【解析】

第一句：去掉far 由350 miles可知其后不接far。

第二句：move→moved 由句中的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)last week可知此處應(yīng)用move的過(guò)去式。

第三句：her→his；other→another 由主語(yǔ)Dad可知應(yīng)為his；another one表示＂另一份工作＂。

第四句：classmate→classmates ＂我的＂同學(xué)應(yīng)不止一個(gè)，故用復(fù)數(shù)。

第五句：bad→worse 詞組to make things worse意為＂使情況更糟糕的是＂。

第五句：to→with 詞組share sth with sb意為＂與某人分享某物/事＂。

第六句：在first前加the 解析：序數(shù)詞前通常要加the。

第七句：tiring→tired 表示＂疲憊的＂用tired，表示＂令人疲憊的＂用tiring。此處修飾人(I)，故用tired。

第八句：is→are 句子的主語(yǔ)是you，故用are。