Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

One day a young man announces that he had the most beautiful heart. A large crowd both admired his heart for its perfection. A young man was very proud of it. Suddenly, an old man appeared and said, "Your heart is not nearly as beautifully as mine." The crowd or the young man looked at the old man’s heart. It was beaten strongly, but full of scars. The young man laughed and said, "You must joking." The old man said, "Yours is perfect but every scars represents a person to who I have given my love because they remind me of the love we shared. So now do you see what does true beauty is? "

Answer 1

【答案】

One day a young man that he had the most beautiful heart. A large crowd admired his heart for its perfection. young man was very proud of it. Suddenly, an old man appeared and said, ＂Your heart is not nearly as as mine.＂ The crowd the young man looked at the old man’s heart. It was strongly, but full of scars. The young man laughed and said, ＂You must joking.＂ The old man said, ＂Yours is perfect but every represents a person to I have given my love because they remind me of the love we shared. So now do you see what true beauty is?

【解析】

【文章大意】什么才算真正的美?老人布滿疤痕的心臟，還是年輕人完好無(wú)損的心臟?其實(shí)，真正的美是給予。

第一處：announces→announced�？疾閯�(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。＂One day＂及全文的主體時(shí)態(tài)暗示本句應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第二處：both→all�？疾榇�詞的用法。A large crowd表明所涉及的人數(shù)為三者或三者以上，故此處用all。

第三處：A→The。考查定冠詞的用法。此處為年輕人第二次出現(xiàn)，表示特指，應(yīng)用定冠詞。

第四處：beautifully→beautiful�？疾樾稳菰~的用法。在固定結(jié)構(gòu)as...as...＂和……一樣……＂中應(yīng)用形容詞。

第五處：or→and。考查連詞。＂The crowd＂和＂the young man＂為并列的兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)，故此處應(yīng)用and連接。

第六處：beaten→beating�？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。It指代the old man’s heart，此處表示主動(dòng)進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作，故改beaten為beating。

第七處：joking前加be�？疾閯�(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。must后面接動(dòng)詞原形，而此處表示正在進(jìn)行的動(dòng)作，故應(yīng)用be joking。

第八處：scars→scar�？疾槊�詞單復(fù)數(shù)。every后面接名詞單數(shù)，故此處應(yīng)用scar。

第九處：who→whom�？疾殛P(guān)系代詞。介詞后面接指人的賓格whom。

第十處：去掉does�？疾榫涫�。what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句為陳述句語(yǔ)序，而is為系動(dòng)詞，what為其表語(yǔ)。助動(dòng)詞does多余，需要?jiǎng)h除。