Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上聊天而忽視了與父母的溝通。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖畫，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，闡述產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因和你的看法。寫一篇120字左右的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly portrayed in the picture, occupied in chatting on the Internet, a boy refuses to talk with his mother. The mother can do nothing but stand behind the boy, depressed.

It is the exact reflection of lack of communication between parents and children. Several reasons contribute to it. First, the Internet provides us with a place where we can communicate with different people, in which case we are addicted to the virtual world and keep our distance from people around us. Besides, pressure from study drives us to seek excitement on the Internet. Also, parents, busy with their work, spare little time to stay with their children.

As far as I’m concerned, some effective measures should be taken by parents and children. In terms of children, we should cut back on the time when they play computers and be aware of the negative effects of the Internet. Parents and children should exchange their ideas and feelings regularly.

【解析】

【試題分析】

網(wǎng)絡(luò)時(shí)代有些孩子沉溺于網(wǎng)上交流而忽視了與父母的溝通。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖畫，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖畫中所表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，闡述產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因和你的看法。寫一篇120字左右的短文。注意：一定要寫出原因和自己的看法。寫作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順。注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。可根據(jù)句意要求適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【寫作技巧】

看圖作文在高考書面表達(dá)中占有相當(dāng)大的比例。由于這類題型的特點(diǎn)是形象、直觀、內(nèi)容具體，且在圖畫的前面一般還有文字說(shuō)明，因此考生一般都有話可寫，且不會(huì)跑題。但在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意的是：

1. 仔細(xì)閱讀圖畫及文字說(shuō)明，首先應(yīng)確定文章體裁。這類文章一般以記敘文或議論文為主。

記敘文：要抓住記敘文的六要素：時(shí)間(when)、地點(diǎn)(where)、人物(who)、事件(what)、原因(why)和過(guò)程(how)，即：五個(gè)＂W＂和一個(gè)＂H＂。根據(jù)圖畫提示把這六個(gè)問(wèn)題寫清楚了，至少可得及格分?jǐn)?shù)。

議論文：一般先要把圖畫聯(lián)系起來(lái)，弄清楚圖畫的目的、意圖；然后進(jìn)行抽象概括，找出一個(gè)議論主題/對(duì)象，接著對(duì)圖畫加以解釋、說(shuō)明；最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，得出結(jié)論。對(duì)事物進(jìn)行議論時(shí)，一定要做到條理清楚，論點(diǎn)鮮明，論證充分。

2. 確定人稱。如果以日記、回憶錄等形式來(lái)寫，一般采用第一人稱；如果是以講故事的形式來(lái)寫，則一般采用第三人稱來(lái)寫。但不管用哪種人稱，全文都必須一致。

3. 確定時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容及所采用的文章體裁，確定文章所要用的時(shí)態(tài)。切記全文時(shí)態(tài)的一致性。

4. 發(fā)揮聯(lián)想要合理、適度。這類文章的說(shuō)明一般都要求考生進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)穆?lián)想和發(fā)揮，以便使上下文能更好地連貫起來(lái)。但聯(lián)想和發(fā)揮一定要根據(jù)圖畫做到合情合理，不能過(guò)多地胡亂聯(lián)想和發(fā)揮。

5. 虛實(shí)結(jié)合，詳略得當(dāng)。對(duì)于圖畫中的內(nèi)容，該詳細(xì)敘述、描寫的，就必須要詳細(xì)、具體；可以一筆帶過(guò)的就一筆帶過(guò)。