Question

【題目】 短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞；

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉；

修改：在錯詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

Answer 1

【答案】

Two years , I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. , I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two . I called my parents, I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they be worried about because I was so away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

【解析】

【語篇解讀】作者講述了自己兩年前在巴西時所發(fā)生的事情。

第一處：副詞錯誤。這里只是說“兩年前”用ago，而且并非是在間接引語中。故before改為ago。

第二處：介詞錯誤。rent是及物動詞，后面直接跟物作賓語。rent sth.指租某物。故去掉rent后的for。

第三處：副詞錯誤。要用副詞對整個句子進行修飾或說明。故Ufortunate改為Unfortunately。

第四處：名詞錯誤。week是可數(shù)名詞，可數(shù)名詞被two修飾，要用復(fù)數(shù)。故week改為weeks。

第五處：連詞錯誤。根據(jù)句意：我打了電話給父母，但沒有告訴發(fā)生的車禍。因此前后句意轉(zhuǎn)折。故so改為but。

第六處：時態(tài)錯誤。賓語從句的時態(tài)應(yīng)該和主句保持一致。主句用一般過去時，賓語從句也應(yīng)該用一般過去時。故will改為would。

第七處：代詞錯誤。be worried about sb.介詞后要用人稱代詞的賓格，此處指“他們會擔(dān)心我”。故myself改為me。

第八處：副詞錯誤。根據(jù)句意可知，此處不存在比較。故farther改為far。

第九處：形容詞錯誤。此處指“給父母講有趣的故事”，修飾事物要用-ing結(jié)尾的形容詞。故interested改為interesting。

第十處：冠詞錯誤。句意：因此，沒有人知道真相。這里是特指。故truth前加the。