Question

假如你Dave，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格信息介紹自己，可適發(fā)揮。

要求：語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)意連貫，語(yǔ)法正確。大約80詞左右。

Name	Dave	Age	13
Appearance（外貌）	中等個(gè)子，偏瘦，黑色短發(fā)
Hobbies（愛(ài)好）	聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，打籃球 …
上周末活動(dòng)	忙碌高興	周六上午做作業(yè)；下午和父母開(kāi)車去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打籃球；下午聽(tīng)音樂(lè)……

My name is Dave. I’m 13.

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Answer 1

My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.

Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，題目只給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，確定寫作要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一二人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文運(yùn)用一些常見(jiàn)短語(yǔ)：did my homework做家庭作業(yè) at home 在家listened to聽(tīng) did some reading做閱讀。Last weekend, I was busy but happy這外句子運(yùn)用了but連接兩個(gè)并列的形容詞。And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading這個(gè)句子中and連接兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文。