Question

4．It seems that we have homework every day．Why should we students do homework？What are the advantages of doing homework？Why does too much homework sometimes annoy you？Write a passage according to the chart below？

pros	cons
review what we have learned in class	much homework needs lots of time and energy
see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught	have no time for our hobbies and activities
…	…
…	…

注意：
1．所寫內(nèi)容必須包含表格內(nèi)容．
2．需另寫出各兩個優(yōu)缺點．
3．詞數(shù)：80個左右．
We students can benefit from homework in many ways．To begin with，we have to review what we have learned in class in order to do our homework．This gives us the chance to see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught and practice what we have to work on our own when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．It can help us learn to keep a balance between hobbies and schoolwork
However，there are also disadvantages to do too much homework．Firstly，too much homework needs a lot of time and energy，so we students have no time for our favorite hobbies and activities．What is worse，many students complain that homework is boring because they have to do the same things again and again．what's worse，it may lead some students to give up studing．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是談談家庭作業(yè)的利與弊．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱和第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1有利之處：復習課上學過的內(nèi)容；看看是否已經(jīng)掌握老師所教的內(nèi)容
2不利之處：太多的作用需要太多的時間和精力；沒時間去做自己喜歡的和運動
3需另寫出各兩個優(yōu)缺點
常用到的重點短語：
benefit from  從…獲益
on one's own 獨自的
depend on 依賴
what's worse 更糟的是
【高分句型】
1．①To begin with，we have to review②what we have learned in class ③in order to do our homework．
①to begin with 首先
②what引導的賓語從句，作為review的賓語．
③in order to 表目的，做目的狀語．
2．This gives us the chance ①to see②if we have understood everything ③the teacher has taught and practice ④what we have to work on our own⑤when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．
①動詞不定式做后置定語，修飾chance．
②if引導的賓語從句，作為see的賓語．
③the teacher has taught定語從句，修飾先行詞everything，關系詞that做賓語，故省略．
④what引導的賓語從句，作為practice的賓語．
⑤when引導的時間狀語從句．
3．①What is worse，many students complain②that homework is boring ③because they have to do the same things again and again
①what's worse 更糟的是
②that引導的賓語從句，作為complain的賓語．
③because引導的原因狀語從句．

解答 We students can benefit from homework in many ways．To begin with，we have to review what we have learned in class in order to do our homework．【高分句型】（復習課上學過的內(nèi)容）This gives us the chance to see if we have understood everything the teacher has taught（是否已經(jīng)掌握老師所教的內(nèi)容） and practice what we have to work on our own when we do our homework at home and not depend on teachers and classmates for help．（鍛煉自己做作業(yè)的能力）It can help us learn to keep a balance between hobbies and schoolwork．（幫助學會保持學業(yè)和愛好的平衡）【高分句型】
However，there are also disadvantages to do too much homework．Firstly，too much homework needs a lot of time and energy，（太多的作用需要太多的時間和精力）so we students have no time for our favorite hobbies and activities．（沒時間去做自己喜歡的和運動）What's more，many students complain that homework is boring because they have to do the same things again and again．【高分句型】．what's worse，it may lead some students to give up studying（抱怨在做同一件事情，甚至厭學）

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