Question

假如你是新華中學一名初三畢業(yè)生。請根據(jù)以下要點給某英文報寫一篇英語短文，談談你對初三生活的看法。
(1)對獲得的幫助表示感謝；
(2)對將來生活的規(guī)劃；
(3)對學弟、學妹的建議。
注意：1．詞數(shù)90左右；
2．短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點；可適當發(fā)揮，使其通順、連貫；
4．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person's life. As a junior 3 student, it won't take long before I graduate.___________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Junior school is regarded as a best time in a person’s life. As a junior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, including teachers, parents and friends. Without their help and advice, my life would be different.
Secondly, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study at senior school, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Meanwhile exercise and recreational activities are also needed. Life without sunshine and laughter is sure to be a failure.
Finally I hope that all the younger fellows always keep your dream in mind so that you will be highly motivated all the time. Even if sometimes you are in trouble, tell yourself tomorrow holds the miracle. Just one more day may be all it will take to realize your dream.

試題分析：本篇書面表達應包括三方面內(nèi)容：(1)對獲得的幫助表示感謝；(2)對將來生活的規(guī)劃；(3)對學弟、學妹的建議。寫作中應注意文章的層次脈絡以及時態(tài)。準確運用一般過去時、一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時等。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，準確運用時態(tài)。文章層次清楚，銜接連貫，運用firstly, secondly, finally，meanwhile等銜接詞。本文中運用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:make up one’s mind, make every effort, key to success等。同時，文章還用了被動語態(tài)。