Question

10．Write at least 60words about the topic"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"（以"我初中的最后一個寒假"為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
即將到來的寒假是你在初中階段最后一個寒假．你想怎樣度過這個寒假呢？你最想做的事情是什么呢？你覺得你父母會贊成你的想法嗎？請把你的想法寫下來，告訴他們吧．
（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分．）
It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"My last winter holiday in junior middle school"為題說說你對這最后一個暑假的想法．時態(tài)主要為一般現在時和一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1你想怎樣度過這個寒假呢？
2你最想做的事情是什么呢？
3你覺得你父母會贊成你的想法嗎？
常用到的重點短語
owing to 因為…
feel like doing sth 想要做某事
 in favour of支持  同意
First and foremost首先
in addition此外
agree with贊同

【高分句型】
1．①Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing②that I ③prefer to do most．
①動名詞短語作為主語，謂語動詞用單數is．
②定語從句，that是關系詞，作為從句的賓語．先行詞the thing．
③prefer to do更喜歡做某事．
2．①In addition，②if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll ③agree with me of course．
①in addition此外，插入語．
②if引導的條件狀語從句，遵循主將從現的規(guī)則．
③agree with贊同，of course當然．

解答 It's my last winter holiday in junior middle school that seems to be the most precious one．Owing to this，I feel like doing something meaningful．（想怎樣度過這個寒假）Reading extra books for three hours every day is the thing that I prefer to do most．【高分句型】（最想做的事情是什么） I think my parents will be in favour of my thought．First and foremost，books are as the"spirit food"in our life．Secondly，as the proverb said，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"I'm preparing for my essential test indeed，but extra books will give me a clearer mind to study．In addition，if my parents think my thoughts are reasonable，they'll agree with me of course．【高分句型】（你父母會贊成你的想法）That's my last winter holiday in junior middle school．

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，應在內心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當的詞語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容．盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．