Question

3．You must have changed a lot from primary school to junior middle school，haven't you？Please talk about your changes from many aspects such as appearance，personality，hobbies，school life and so on．
You must write at least 80words．The beginning of the article has been given．
My life has changed a lot in the last few years．
                              

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others過去我太害羞了不敢在人前講話．
too+adj/adv+to do sth太…而不能做某事
【高分句型二】
I study so well that  I have been a top student．我學(xué)習(xí)很努力現(xiàn)在是我們班的第一名．
so…that如此…以至于．that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句

解答 My life has changed a lot in the last few years．（引出下文）
In the past，I was short．I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型一】I wasn't interested in studying and hated tests，so I was weak in all my subjects． And I was silent in class．What's more，I played with my friends every day after school．（過去）
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm taller than before．I am more outgoing and I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（外表和性格的變化）   I don't be afraid to ask questions in class now． I study so well that I have been a top student．【高分句型二】Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（學(xué)習(xí)和愛好的改變）Last week，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．School life is busier because we have more subjects．（改變后）
  I hope to get better grades and go to senior high school．So I will study harder and learn more．（愿望和打算）

點評 做英語書面表達時，只要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句．最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤．