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根據(jù)中文設置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段．

注意：1．字數(shù)60～80．

2．所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上．(可適當發(fā)揮)

3．發(fā)言稿的開頭和結尾已給出．

假如你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動．請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿．

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen year old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends,

I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. ________________________________

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學生：習作： 　　Dear friends, 　　I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. My name is Zhang Bin. I'm fifteen years old. I live in Beijing. One of my favourite subjects are(X1) biology. I'm interesting(X2) in drawing. In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy singing(X3) of birds in nature. I want to be a biologist when I will grow up. 　　I feel luck(X4) to join you. I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make our earth more beautiful and much greener. 　　That's all. Thank you for listening. 　　剖析：“one of…”之一，其后所跟的名詞或代詞用復數(shù)，但謂語動詞必須用單數(shù)．所以此處的are要改為is． 　　例如：One of them is lost．他們中的一個人迷路了． 　　2．be interested in是固定短語，意為“對……感興趣”，而interesting則表示事物本身有趣的，令人產(chǎn)生興趣的，例如： 　　I am not interested in what he says．對他所說的話我不感興趣． 　　The story is very interesting．這個故事很有趣． 　　I will give you some interesting storybooks．我將給你幾本有趣的故事書． 　　故文中的interesting要改為interested． 　　3．enjoy后跟doing表示“喜歡，樂于做某事”，而這里是特指自然界中鳥的聲音，因此文中的singing是動名詞，前應加the． 　　4．feel“覺得”是系動詞，后應跟形容詞做表語，所以名詞luck應改為形容詞lucky． 　　總評：本文作者能圍繞主題來介紹自己，層層深入、語言流暢、表達準確、形象生動、具體、個別用詞欠妥，還需不斷加強．