Question

書面表達（15分）

社會的發(fā)展帶來了一系列的環(huán)境問題，如：水污染，動物滅絕等。如何使我們的世界變得更加美好，是我們要思考的一個問題。請你根據(jù)所學內(nèi)容，以“Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文。

                          

Our environment is getting worse and worse,                                                                                       

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Let’s Make Our World More Beautiful  

Our environment is getting worse and worse,    such as the water is getting dirtier and dirtier and many animals are in danger. What should we do to protect our environment?                                                                                  

First, I think we should save every drop of water. Second, we should protect animals. Animals are our friends and they can give us joy. We should share the world with them. Third, we’d better plant more trees. If everyone try their best to protect our environment, our would will become more and more beautiful.  

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，寫一篇如何讓世界變得更美好的短文。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。另外，在描述時，應(yīng)該注意人稱的變化。

考點：命題作文的寫作

點評：本題給出的材料較為簡略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。