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這是一幅你們學校的平面圖，請用簡潔的語言介紹一下校園的分布，詞數80個左右．

注：1．敘述要有條理，方位清楚，應包括圖中的主要內容，可適當增減細節(jié)，使意思連貫．(但不得寫出自己或學校的真實名稱)

2．句子開頭已給出，請你接下去寫．(flowerbeds花圃；main主要的)

This is a map of my school. ________________________________

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學生：習作： 　　This is a map of my school. When you come into the school gate, you will see a tall teaching is(X1) in the middle of the school. There are two flowerbeds on either sides(X2) of the main road. On the left, there is a library building. On the right, there is a office building(X3). A big playground is behind the teaching building. You can find a computer room next to the playground. You can see many trees around the school. My school isn't big or beautiful(X4). 　　剖析：1．see sth．后接的應是賓語補足語，所以此處的is應去掉． 　　2．either兩者中的任何一個，應跟名詞的單數形式，所以sides應改為side． 　　3．office開始的是元音音素，所以應用冠詞an． 　　4．not…or連接的是并列的兩項否定，而此處說的是“我們的學校不大但卻很漂亮”，所以應改為not…but． 　　總評：本文覆蓋了所有內容要點，敘述有條理，方位清楚有序．