Question

8．假如你叫王琳，你校成立了英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部，正在招聘會(huì)員，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)所提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)給俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)聘信．

主要內(nèi)容	主要要點(diǎn)
自我介紹	活潑開(kāi)朗，為人非常隨和； 喜愛(ài)英語(yǔ)，善于英語(yǔ)交流； 參加競(jìng)賽，屢次演講獲獎(jiǎng)； …（自擬）
寫(xiě)信目的	成為成員，學(xué)會(huì)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神； 結(jié)識(shí)朋友，豐富課外生活； 增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，提高英語(yǔ)能力； …（自擬）

注意：
1．表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)90左右．開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名及本人姓名．
參考詞匯：English speaking competition英語(yǔ)演講比賽
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Wang Lin，a 15-year-old girl studying in Class 2，Grade 3．I'm outgoing and easy-going．I like English and I'm good at communicating in English．I often take part in the English speaking competition and have won several awards．I also like sports．
I want to be a member of the English club and learn team spirit．I'd like to make more friends and make my life more interesting and colorful．I hope to get more knowledge and improve my English abilities in English．I also want to learn more about the world and study English better．And we can share our ideas and help each other．
I hope you can give me the chance．Thank you．
I hope you can give me the chance．Thank you．
Looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是給俱樂(lè)部負(fù)責(zé)人寫(xiě)一封應(yīng)聘信，應(yīng)聘英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部會(huì)員．注意信件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．自我介紹；活潑開(kāi)朗，為人非常隨和；喜愛(ài)英語(yǔ)，善于英語(yǔ)交流；參加競(jìng)賽，屢次演講獲獎(jiǎng)…
2．寫(xiě)信目的；成為成員，學(xué)會(huì)團(tuán)隊(duì)精神；結(jié)識(shí)朋友，豐富課外生活；增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)，提高英語(yǔ)能力…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
take part in 參加
make friends 交朋友
hope to do sth 希望做某事

【高分句型】
1．I often ①take part in the English speaking competition ②and have won several awards．
①take part in 參加
②and連詞，連接兩個(gè)對(duì)等成分．
2．．①I'd like to make more friends and②make my life more interesting and colorful
①would like to do sth 想要做某事
②make+sth+adj 讓某某怎么樣
3．I hope to get more knowledge and improve my English abilities in English．
hope to do sth 希望做某事

解答 One possible version：
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm Wang Lin，a 15-year-old girl studying in Class 2，Grade 3．I'm outgoing and easy-going．I like English and I'm good at communicating in English．I often take part in the English speaking competition and have won several awards．【高分句型】I also like sports．（自我介紹）
I want to be a member of the English club and learn team spirit．I'd like to make more friends and make my life more interesting and colorful【高分句型】．I hope to get more knowledge and improve my English abilities in English．【高分句型】I also want to learn more about the world and study English better．And we can share our ideas and help each other．（寫(xiě)信目的）
I hope you can give me the chance．Thank you．
Looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes．
  Yours，
  Wang Lin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 圖表類作文寫(xiě)作之前考生首先要認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心．表格內(nèi)容要全部包括在作文中，詞數(shù)要符合要求．句式表達(dá)要正確，注意句子的主謂賓、主系表等結(jié)構(gòu)．文章結(jié)構(gòu)要清晰．考生在平時(shí)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中需牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理，也可為文章增色不少．