Question

9．電視是我們生活中不可或缺的一個(gè)部分．通過電視，我們可以獲取很多知識(shí)，同時(shí)它也有很多弊端．請(qǐng)結(jié)合你的生活實(shí)際，談?wù)効措娨暤睦�與弊（advantages and disadvantages）
要求：（1）書寫工整、語(yǔ)言連貫．
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)與本人有關(guān)的真實(shí)信息．
（3）詞數(shù)：80左右．
Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television
Nowadays，watching television has become more and more popular in our life．By watching TV，we can see many-things happen around us without going out every day，and it helps us get the newest information．We can also learn some useful knowledge．
But every coin has two sides．Television programmes are not always suitable for all ages．Sometimes，there are some movies that children and teenagers should not watch．If we watch TV too long，it may hurt our eyes and bodies． Therefore，I think we shouldn't spend too much time on TV and should choose programs carefully when we watch it．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)効措娨暤睦�與弊（advantages and disadvantages）．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．看電視的有利之處
2．看電視的弊端
3．我的建議
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來越…
without除了…沒有…
help sb do sth幫助某人做某事
be suitable for 適合于…
spend time doing sth花時(shí)間做某事
高分句型：
Nowadays，①watching television has become②more and more popular in our life．
①動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)做主語(yǔ)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)．
②比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí) 越來越…，more and more popular 越來越受歡迎．
But every coin has two sides．
諺語(yǔ)every coin has two sides凡事都有兩面性的運(yùn)用，承上啟下．

解答 Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching Television
Nowadays，watching television has become more and more popular in our life．（高分句型）By watching TV，we can see many-things happen around us without going out every day，and it helps us get the newest information．We can also learn some useful knowledge．（看電視的有利之處）
But every coin has two sides．（高分句型）Television programmes are not always suitable for all ages．Sometimes，there are some movies that children and teenagers should not watch．If we watch TV too long，it may hurt our eyes and bodies．（看電視的有利之處）
   Therefore，I think we shouldn't spend too much time on TV and should choose programs carefully when we watch it．我的建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)．行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述，用簡(jiǎn)短的語(yǔ)句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語(yǔ)句．在作文完成的時(shí)候，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié)