Question

你有沒(méi)有感覺(jué)到自己的家鄉(xiāng)每天都在變化？以前低矮的平房變成了美麗的高樓，狹窄的小路變成了寬廣的公路，破舊的居民區(qū)變成了賞心悅目的花園……請(qǐng)拿起你的筆，記錄下家鄉(xiāng)日新月異的變化吧！
要求：
1．寫(xiě)出過(guò)去的家鄉(xiāng)情景。
2．描述現(xiàn)在的美景。
3．指出這些變化給我們帶來(lái)方便的同時(shí)又引發(fā)了哪些問(wèn)題。
4．不少于100詞。
Changes in my hometown
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Answer 1

Changes in my hometown
I used to live in a small town with trees all around. There was no tall building and the only street was narrow. Just outside the town， there was a river. You can see different kinds of fish swimming in the clear water. People here lived a simple life.
Great changes have taken place here. You can see tall buildings， big department stores and factories everywhere. Different kinds of cars and buses are running in the big streets. But with the development of the industry， we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.

試題分析：是一篇給材料作文，要求寫(xiě)一篇介紹家鄉(xiāng)變化的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文中要適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感想。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)以及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，文章就是要通過(guò)這種時(shí)間的變化來(lái)體現(xiàn)家鄉(xiāng)變化的。注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文的所選題目，就發(fā)生在學(xué)生的身邊，比較接近學(xué)生的生活，這樣學(xué)生寫(xiě)起來(lái)有話(huà)可說(shuō)。文中正確運(yùn)用了三種時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)描述家鄉(xiāng)的變化，很真實(shí)生動(dòng)；對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展中存在的問(wèn)題見(jiàn)解比較深刻；另外在遣詞造句，連詞運(yùn)用等方面都可圈可點(diǎn)。
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