Question

13．假如你是Alice，你的網(wǎng)友林濤想了解你的學校和你的情況．請你根據(jù)下面的信息，給林濤發(fā)一封電子郵件，告訴他有關(guān)你和你的學校的情況．
提示：

名字	Alice
長相	高而苗條，大眼睛，黑頭發(fā)
學校 資料	學校大而漂亮，有 1個圖書館，…
	教室干凈，…
	課8點鐘開始，…，我們星期六星期日不上課．
	家離學校遠，坐車上學要20分鐘
	對學校生活的感想．（至少一點）

要求：
1包括信息中提及的所有內(nèi)容，語句通順，條理清楚．
2字數(shù)100左右，可適當加以發(fā)揮．
Dear Lin Tao，
I'm a student of No.4Middle School now．I am tall and slim．I have two big eyes and black hair．Our school is very big and beaetiful．There is alibrary in front of the classroom．We can read books with our classmates there．Our classes begin at 8：00 from Monday to Friday，we have no classes on Saturday and Sunday．There are about 200 teachers in our school．They are all nice to us．I live far from our scool．I often go to scool by bus．It takes metwenty minutes to get to school．
We have a good time at school every day．I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．
．
             Yours Alice!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
There is a library in front of the classroom．教室前面有一個圖書館．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．我認為我們應(yīng)該在這樣一所美麗的學校里努力學習．這是一個賓語從句，I think 是主句，后面的是賓語從句．

解答 Dear Lin Tao，
I'm a student of No.4Middle School now．I am tall and slim．I have two big eyes and black hair．【要點一，介紹自己的情況】Our school is very big and beaetiful．There is a library in front of the classroom．【高分句型一，注意there be 句型的使用】We can read books with our classmates there．Our classes begin at 8：00 from Monday to Friday，we have no classes on Saturday and Sunday．There are about 200 teachers in our school．They are all nice to us．I  live far from our scool．I often go to scool by bus．It takes me twenty minutes to get to school．【要點二，介紹學校的情況】
We have a good time at school every day．I think we should work hard in such a beautiful school．【高分句型二，注意賓語從句的使用】．【要點三，對學校生活的感想】
Yours，
Alice．

點評 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點，不可遺漏．需在平時積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．