Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

雖然目前過洋節(jié)已經(jīng)成為一種時尚，但隨著民族精神教育的深入開展，傳統(tǒng)的中國節(jié)越來越受到重視。假如你叫沈愛華，請你給你的美國筆友John寫一封80詞左右的信，邀請他來中國感受中國風(fēng)俗文化，并向他介紹你最喜歡的中國節(jié)日。文章首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

提示詞：red packet 紅包、壓歲錢 set off firecrackers 放鞭炮

Dear John,

How is it going? You asked about Chinese festivals in you last letter. There are many Chinese traditional festivals in China. _______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

Dear John,

How is it going? You asked about Chinese festivals in you last letter. There are many Chinese traditional festivals in China. The Spring Festival, Chinese New Year is the most important festival for all of us. It’s my favourite festival. All family members get together on New Year Eve to have a big meal. Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So during the fifteen days, we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets from their grandparents, parents, uncles and aunts. They set off firecrackers, wear new clothes and have many interesting activities. Would you please come to China and spend the festival with me? Write soon.

Yours,

Shen Aihua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹自己最喜歡的中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日和在那時的活動。小作者把要求寫的幾點都表述得很清晰。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者把列舉的要點都寫了進(jìn)去。這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如All family members get together on New Year Eve to have a big meal. At that time, children are the happiest because they can get many red packets from their grandparents, parents, uncles and aunts.有一些好的固定短語還有連詞。

考點：命題類作文。