Question

書面表達 （共15分）

隨著教育改革的不斷深化，中小學生的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。學生在校時間縮短，作業(yè)量減少，課間開展豐富多彩的體育活動，有更多的業(yè)余時間做自己喜歡做的事。請以My school life has changed為題，圍繞以上內(nèi)容并結(jié)合下面圖示完成短文。

參考詞匯： kick jianzi 踢毽子 skip rope 跳繩

要求：

1. 要在文中表達自己的觀點；

2. 70詞左右(不包括所給的開頭)；

3. 語言表達準確，語意通順、連貫。

My school life has changed

My school life has changed a lot. In the past, students of our ages had to stay at school for 10 hours every day and they had many lessons and lots of homework. They had little time for after-school activities.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My school life has changed

My school life has changed a lot. In the past, students of our ages had to stay at school for 10 hours every day and they had many lessons and lots of homework. They had little time for after-school activities.

However things have changed greatly now. We don’t need to get to school in the early morning, because our class begins at eight o’clock. We get enough sleep.

At school we have at least one hour for sports every day.I like to kick jianzi and skip rope. In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports. Some play basketball, some play football, and others run on the playground.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求根據(jù)所給提示寫寫一篇以My school life has changed為題的作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，并且給出了具體要求，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時態(tài)運用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯的文章。

考點：命題式作文