Question

書面表達(dá)（計15分）

隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展和普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物在中國也變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成了我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活的一部分了。相信同學(xué)們身邊一定有不少同學(xué)已經(jīng)通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)進(jìn)行購物了，比如*****網(wǎng)，京東商城等，但是網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物究竟有何利弊呢？請寫一篇100詞左右的短文，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)上購物的好處與壞處。

要點(diǎn)：1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物在中國發(fā)展迅速；2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的兩三個優(yōu)勢，比如：商品多樣，不限時間，不用排隊等；3.不足之處兩三點(diǎn),比如：不知道質(zhì)量如何，多花錢，不能夠享受購物的樂趣等。

參考詞匯：Internet shopping/ shopping on line, advantages and disadvantages

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

With the quick development of the Internet, shopping online is growing faster in China. More and more people in China are interested in shopping on line.

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of Internet shopping these days. Some students think it’s very convenient for us to go shopping on the Internet. The Internet provides us with so much information about the products so that we can have many choices. The shops on the Internet, for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What’s more, we dong need to wait in a queue.

However, some students disagreed with them. We can’t see things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not. Sometimes we have to wait for them to come or spend more money than we expected. Besides, we can’t enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇描寫互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的文章，首先要用正確的格式去寫，會用一些短語，了解英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語的不同，需要平時對課本上的課文要正確地理解，會仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語句子，在文章中介紹互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，所以注意用一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時，用第一人稱來敘述。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：for example，what’s more等，為了上下文的銜接起了一定作用。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。